Hi Necrotic Synthesis,

This is a fantastic poem. The tone is full of longing and anxiety. It grabs all the reader's attention and makes them want to read on. The poem is about someone who is searching for a way to end the turmoil that is going on in their mind. I am hoping that the speaker will find the peace they want. I read to the last word to see if this happened. I loved this poem. The poem had a unique rhyme that is well done and consistent. It gives the poem a wonderful rhythm. The meter is consistent from line to line. The poem flows extremely well. It is a pleasure to read. You have used punctuation and grammar consistently in this poem. There is nothing to distract the reader from their reading pleasure. Great job.