Hello, Richard ~ Thankful!!!, aka Brennus!

INITIAL IMPRESSION / OVERVIEW:

I enjoyed reading your "Wanna Get Lost in Space" blog post today.

Your writing kept me riveted and I read straight through to the end.



MORE DETAILED FEEDBACK:

Happy Writing.Com Anniversary month! I hope you enjoy this review as a celebration of your time here and find the review uplifting and encouraging.

I literally laughed out loud while reading this blog post. You have a fantastic sense of humor.

You're also a mind reader. At the start, each sentence gave me a question, and then you answered the question. Over and over! Remarkable.

My favorite line was the last. Nice way to wrap things up. The whole post was well done though.

Too bad this won't work as a source for refreshment. I wondered what the "invalid item" was? Makes me want to see if Andre's Banana Bar is still open. I'm guessing, if it isn't, that it's that. I could totally be wrong. It's late and I ought to already be in bed though, so after this review, I'm wrapping up. If I remember, I'll check tomorrow. The Banana Bar was always more fun when you were around! I hope you're able to return more often. I, and surely many others, miss you.

I didn't notice any spelling or grammatical mistakes (or mistakes of any kind) in your "Wanna Get Lost in Space" blog post.



IDEAS TO MAKE YOUR PIECE STRONGER:
I would love to have something great to share here, but, other than sharing what the invalid item is / was (which you might not even know shows up as invalid item now), I think it's wonderful and perfect just as it is. Well done!

As with any review, please take what serves you and release or ignore what doesn't.


CONCLUSION:
I enjoyed reading your "Wanna Get Lost in Space" blog post and it was a nice bit of light reading and humor to end my day.

Thank you for sharing your time, creativity, heart, sense of humor, experiences, and writing with the Writing.Com community!

Once again, happy anniversary month! I hope the year ahead is filled with blessings and joy for you!

May love, joy and peace be yours in abundance!
PWheeler










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