This looks like the start of an interesting story. A queen goes missing, and the kingdom's main river starts flowing backwards. Is this a coincidence, or are the two tied together? It will take a brave scribe to uncover the mystery, and save his kingdom, or all will be lost. What will happen to him on his quest?

Characters
Characters look interesting.

Spelling and Grammar
There's a section where it's mentioned that the scribe took the job recently, only "Job" is written as "Jo".

Well, this is the BIG BAD WOLF, and I howl at the moon every night.
HOWLLLLLLLLLLLLL!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!


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