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Mayonnaise and the Universe Open in new Window. [E]
The secret to time travel
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Rated: E | (4.5)
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Mayonnaise - the secret to Time Travel? One man might find out the truth behind those words, when his neighbor comes over, and askes for this condiment. Is this neighbor some kind of crazy person, or are they actually a time traveler, who needs the mayo in order to get back to their right time? Perhaps there is more to this story, than what is written.

Characters
The characters look interesting.

Spelling and Grammar
I don't see any issues with spelling or grammar.

Well, this is the BIG BAD WOLF, and I howl at the moon every night.
HOWLLLLLLLLLLLLL!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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