Steal Your Hand [E] A little poem about taking my love’s hand and not wanting to let go. |
HAPPY 20th WDC ACCOUNT ANNIVERSARY FROM "Anniversary Reviews" Hello, Tiffany Winter Willow! INITIAL IMPRESSION / OVERVIEW: I enjoyed reading your romantic poem today. Your writing kept me riveted and I read straight through to the end. MORE DETAILED FEEDBACK: Happy 20th Writing.Com Anniversary! Wow! 20 years here! And I was curious and checked your community listing and you even logged in today, so it made me happy to see that you are still active here. What a lovely long time to be on this fun site. I hope you enjoy this review as a celebration of your time here and find the review uplifting and encouraging. I could really relate to this "Steal your hand" poem of yours, as I feel the same way about my own spouse. Isn't love a beautiful thing? I suspect that most people in happy relationships could relate to this poem of yours. I liked that you and your beloved also go on walks together. I enjoyed a lovely walk with mine today and it was a great blessing to me, and I hope to him too, of course. I thought you did a great job with the rhyming in this romantic poem of yours. I didn't notice any spelling in your "Steal your hand" poem. I thought the romance/ love and relationship genres you selected were appropriate for this poem (and overall poetry folder) of yours. If you wanted to pick a third genre (as you surely know, after 20 years here, we're allowed three genre choices), perhaps experience, biographical or personal would work. IDEAS TO MAKE YOUR PIECE STRONGER: I would love to have something great to share here, but I think it's wonderful as it is. Well done! As with any review, please take what serves you and release or ignore what doesn't. CONCLUSION: I enjoyed reading your "Steal your hand" poem and it made me happy to know that you are in a positive, loving relationship that makes you happy. Thank you for sharing your time, creativity, heart, experiences, and writing with the Writing.Com community! Once again, happy anniversary month! I hope the year ahead is filled with blessings and joy for you! May love, joy and peace be yours in abundance! PWheeler A SuperPower Reviewers Choice review! Positive Hearts A Review from: "Positive Hearts Reviews Group" HAPPY WDC ACCOUNT ANNIVERSARY FROM "Anniversary Reviews" My review has been submitted for consideration in "Good Deeds Get CASH!" .
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