Hello, Richard ~ Thankful!!!, aka Brennus!


INITIAL IMPRESSION / OVERVIEW:

I enjoyed reading your Gilligans Island Theme Song parody poem / lyrics about St. Patrick and Saint Gertrude every time I read it, including today.

Your writing kept me riveted and I read straight through to the end.



MORE DETAILED FEEDBACK:

Happy Writing.Com Anniversary month! I read this "Ireland He Did Love. Or, Was It Cats?" poem of yours sometime in the past and enjoyed it, but didn't have time to review it right then, so I flagged it for an anniversary review (meaning I saved the link to it in a special "November" file. ). I hope you enjoy this review as a celebration of your time here and find the review uplifting and encouraging.

Yours was my favorite of all the lyrics written for the Grumpy's Saint Paddy's Day Contest in 2023. Thank you for writing a sample poem / set of lyrics for all of us who participated. You are excellent at leading by example and providing humor while you do.

I had forgotten about St. Gertrude's Day, which is surprising, given my great love of cats.

My favorite line was: "I swear it's apple juice." It made me smile. I enjoyed your whole poem / set of lyrics though. Actually, maybe will I change my mind and make my favorite line the last one: "Cuddle with your cats!" It's fabulous advice for a cat lover like me, and a lovely way to end the poem.

I thought you did a great job with the prompt and in following the rhythym of the original lyrics you were parodying (is that a word? It is now!).

I didn't notice any spelling or grammatical mistakes (or mistakes of any kind) in your lyrics / poem.

I thought the comedy, holiday, and mythology genres you selected were appropriate for this poem.


IDEAS TO MAKE YOUR PIECE STRONGER:
I would love to have something great to share here, but I think it's wonderful as it is. Well done!


CONCLUSION:
I enjoyed reading your poetic lyrics again and thank you for writing and posting them here.

Thank you for sharing your time, creativity, heart, experiences, humor, and writing with the Writing.Com community!

Once again, happy anniversary month! I hope the year ahead is filled with blessings and joy for you!

May love, joy and peace be yours in abundance!
PWheeler










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