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 A Perfect Smile Open in new Window. [E]
"I have become truly in awe...Of your comforting gestures..." - a poem.
by Tim Chiu Author Icon
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Rated: E | (5.0)
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Greetings, Tim! Found you again on the Random Read and Review Button.

Ahh, nothing like a sweet love poem. And free verse, too. Like a letter sent to your significant other.

We see the delight the narrator takes in their loved one and the way he blissfully extols the virtues of their charming smile. One thing that popped out at me is where you said "Earth's ungodly seasons..." I'm not quite sure what the implications are there. Otherwise this is a nice little poem describing the favorite thing about a significant other.

Take care, thanks for sharing, and keep writing *HeartT*


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