Hello, Detective, aka frigid!

INITIAL IMPRESSION / OVERVIEW:

I enjoyed reading your "A Peaceful Morning" poem this evening.

Your writing kept me riveted and I read straight through to the end.



MORE DETAILED FEEDBACK:

Happy Writing.Com Anniversary day and month! I hope you enjoy this review as a celebration of your time here and find the review uplifting and encouraging.

You composed a lovely poem about a peaceful morning. It sounds like a peaceful morning in springtime, probably early spring, I thought until the last line, when it was confirmed for sure to be early spring. I love that time of year.

I suspect that most nature and spring lovers could relate to and would appreciate this poem of yours.

My favorite line was: "There is peace under the cloudless blue sky" because I liked the imagery and the alliteration. Lovely.

I didn't notice any spelling or grammatical mistakes (or mistakes of any kind) in your "A Peaceful Morning" poem.

I thought the nature and environment genres you selected were appropriate for this poem of yours.


IDEAS TO MAKE YOUR PIECE STRONGER:
In the spirit of helpfulness, I have one little suggestion to make your piece stronger. If you're interested in some constructive criticism, read on. But if you aren't, no worries. Just know that I enjoyed your piece and move on to the next section.

Still reading? You're brave! Yay for you!

My only suggestion is to change your "other" genre to something else. Perhaps personal or biographical or experience? People do search by genres here, I've been told, but rarely if ever search for "other." So you have a better chance of getting more readers for this with almost any other genre. Your poem itself, is fabulous though. No ideas for improving that.

As with any review, please take what serves you and release or ignore what doesn't.

CONCLUSION:
I enjoyed reading your "A Peaceful Morning" poem, and reliving a spring morning as we head into winter here.

Thank you for sharing your time, creativity, heart for nature, experiences, and writing with the Writing.Com community!

Once again, happy anniversary day and month! I hope the year ahead is filled with blessings and joy for you!

May love, joy and peace be yours in abundance!
PWheeler










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