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 Apocalypse in the Haberdashery Open in new Window. [E]
People take refuge in a haberdashery while the apocalypse happens around them outside
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Rated: E | (4.5)
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Revelations (or something close to it) has come, and angels are showing up, only, they aren't nice. One person, among others, manages to make it into a haberdashery for shelter. However, there are those who try to take their chances, but, no matter their religion, they don't make it. Will the Protagonist make it? Read to find out.

Characters
The characters seem interesting.

Spelling and Grammar
I don't see any issues with spelling or grammar.

Suggestions
Due to the language used, and violence depicted, might want to bump this to 13+.

Well, this is the BIG BAD WOLF, and I howl at the moon every night.
HOWLLLLLLLLLLLLL!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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