Hi Eric,

This is a fantastic story. The tone is full of fear. It grabs all the reader's attention and makes the reader want to read on. The reader is wondering Bill will manage to get home before Samantha. They will read to the last word to find out. The story is about a man who encounters a psychiatric patient while driving home. The conflict is well defined. There is no doubt about what is going on here. The characterization is fully developed and believable. The story concentrates on Bill, and he comes across as a real person. The dialogue is well done and realistic. The radio announcer speaks like a real person. The description is detailed and vivid. It puts the reader all the way into the story. The story is well structured and consistent in terms of point of view and tense. You have accomplished a great deal in just a few words. Great job.