Someone is running, being chased, yet unable to hear the pursuer. They are trying to avoid them, while trying to puzzle out what's going on. Then, they realize why they can't hear, just in time for something to happen near them, knocking them to the ground. Now, in addition to the question of if they are still being followed, they have another - Why can't they see?

Characters
The characters seem interesting, and I wonder what will happen to them. Will this be like something akin to Blind Fury?

Spelling and Grammar
I don't see any issues with spelling or grammar. However, due to the use of a certain swear word, you might want to bump this up to 18+ in terms of rating.

Well, this is the BIG BAD WOLF, and I howl at the moon every night.
HOWLLLLLLLLLLLLL!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!


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