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A Graveside Visit Open in new Window. [13+]
A visit with the ghost of Edgar Allan Poe. Written for contests
by The Puppet Master Author Icon
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Review by 👼intuey Author IconMail Icon
In affiliation with Steph Bee's Bee Hive  Open in new Window.
Rated: 13+ | (4.5)
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*Flowerw*Hello, The Puppet Master Author Icon! This is a review on behalf of "Steph Bee's Honey Pit " Open in new Window..

Title and Description - Great title! It pulled me in and made me want to read your story. Your description is to the point and shares exactly what the story is about.

Story Plot - Good, unique twist for a flash fiction piece. I enjoyed the subject matter of the story.

I do wish the story, and the characters were fleshed out a little more. I think there is an even better story just underneath the surface waiting to be brought out a bit more.

Characters - The characters made the story interesting. However, as I said earlier, I wish they had developed more. Even for a flash fiction piece, I felt like they could have been developed a little more.

Setting - You did an excellent job with the setting. It put me in the story and was easy to follow along with. You also did a fabulous job using Edgar Allen Poe references. Great job!

I really enjoyed your story. Thank you so much for sharing it with us.

*Heart* Intuey


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