Hello, Common Child Trusts in God aka davenkristi5!

INITIAL IMPRESSION / OVERVIEW:

I enjoyed reading your "Above Every Cloud" inspirational article.

Your writing kept me riveted and I read straight through to the end.



MORE DETAILED FEEDBACK:

Happy Writing.Com Anniversary day and month! I hope you enjoy this review as a celebration of your time here and find the review uplifting and encouraging.

I could totally relate to this "Above Every Cloud" inspirational article of yours. I love those God moments. I wondered if you'd considered sending it to Guideposts or Chicken Soup for the Soul or somewhere to get an even larger audience for the beautiful message therein?

Your "Above Every Cloud" inspirational article warmed my heart today and reminded me to look for the blue sky above the clouds and remember that God is always in charge and He works everything for His glory and our eternal good.

My favorite line was the Bible verse at the end. It's one of my favorites and it's one that saw a dear friend through her cancer treatments. Praise the Lord, she's been cancer free for more than five years now, by His grace.

I wondered if you entered this "Above Every Cloud" inspirational article of yours in any contest here at writing.com? Surely there are some that would be appropriate and allow older items, though I can't think of one offhand, you could check the writing.com contest lists if you were interested.

I didn't notice any spelling mistakes in your "Above Every Cloud" inspirational article.

I thought the genres you selected were appropriate for this "Above Every Cloud" inspirational article and hope they help you get more readers for this lovely piece.


IDEAS TO MAKE YOUR PIECE STRONGER:
I would love to have something great to share here, but I think it's wonderful as it is. Well done!


As with any review, please take what serves you and release or ignore what doesn't.


CONCLUSION:

I enjoyed reading your "Above Every Cloud" inspirational article and it inspired me to pray for blessings on you and your family and for a cure for cancer and hope for everyone who is suffering.

Thank you for sharing your time, creativity, heart, faith, experiences, and writing with the Writing.Com community!

Once again, happy anniversary day and month! I hope the year ahead is filled with blessings and joy for you!

May love, joy and peace be yours in abundance!
PWheeler










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