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 Neglect Open in new Window. [13+]
A pained poem created by a 16 year old boy, identifying as part of the LGBTQ+ community.
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Review of Neglect  Open in new Window.
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Rated: 13+ | (4.5)
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An interesting poem to read. It talks about inner turmoil being masked by a false outer calm, as one goes through life. Might make one wonder what is being left unsaid, and what the inner conflict is about. Is it the person's own opinions, or is it some sort of secret, which might lead to trouble if folks find out about it.

Thoughts
An interesting poem to read.

Spelling and Grammar
I don't see any issues with spelling or grammar.

Suggestion
Might want to turn off the thing for smaller font, as that can be difficult for some folks to read.

Well, this is the BIG BAD WOLF, and I howl at the moon every night.
HOWLLLLLLLLLLLLL!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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