Hello, StephBee!

INITIAL IMPRESSION / OVERVIEW:

I enjoyed reading and playing your "All About Poems" word search game just now.

Your writing and game kept me riveted and I read and played straight through to the end when the board flashed and turned green (very rewarding feature ).



MORE DETAILED FEEDBACK:

Thank you for your news feed challenge regarding your "All About Poems" word search game. I probably would not have taken the time to do it otherwise, yet I thoroughly enjoyed doing it.

I'm not sure if it's just me, or if it's this way for everyone, but almost always, the last word I find is the shortest one. I know this about myself, so I even looked for "ode" several times at the beginning, but nope, it was the last word found. This made me laugh.

I found onomatopoeia first though. I believe these things mix up for each player so I won't be giving anything away (but if you're reading this and are not StephBee and plan to play, skip on down to the next bullet point, just in case I'm wrong) ... it was upside down all the wan on the right and it just caught my eye. I had scanned the word list first but was still surprised at how nicely it jumped out for me. The big ones are easier to find, but not usually that easy.

I loved that you took the time to alphabetize your search words for your "All About Poems" word search game. That is a nice feature for me as a game player.

I thought you did a great job with the whole overall game. I loved how simple you kept things, yet how you still managed to infuse a sense of fun and encouragement. I also liked the thumbnail image, which I presume is a poem. I loved that you've already received five reviews with an average five star rating for this fun "All About Poems" word search game, and mine will make it six, as it definitely deserves all five stars.

I didn't notice any spelling or grammatical mistakes (or mistakes of any kind) in your "All About Poems" word search game.

I thought the activity and writing genres you selected were appropriate for this "All About Poems" word search game of yours. I wasn't one-hundred percent sure about romance as a genre here, but sonnets are usually romantic so it works.


IDEAS TO MAKE YOUR PIECE STRONGER:
I would love to have something great to share here, but I think it's wonderful as it is. Well done!

CONCLUSION:
I enjoyed "All About Poems" word search game and thank you for creating it and rewarding fast responders to your news feed challenge so generously.

Thank you for sharing your time, creativity, heart, love of poetry, and writing with the Writing.Com community!


May love, joy, poetry, and peace be yours in abundance!
PWheeler










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A Review from: "Positive Hearts Reviews Group"