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More Promptly Poetry PPC 5 Open in new Window. [13+]
More poems for Promptly Poetry, stuffed into this book because I have reached my limit.
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         Review for entry/chapter: "Order and Chaos - week 13" Open in new Window.
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Rated: 13+ | (5.0)
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Greetings, Ned!

I'm here as a fellow member of the PPC5 challenge.

I love seeing how differently everyone works with the provided prompts. We all bring our own personal thoughts and feelings to the table, and we each create something unique from a simple phrase.

This nature poem is splendid, reminding us that even the humble weeds play an important role in life's grand ecosystem. Your words are balanced and conversational, drawing us easily along the free verse as you move from a close-up view of the maternal weed to a larger perspective on worldview and Creation.

I don't have anything substantial to suggest here except for perhaps you have an extra word "they" in the seventh line, speaking of the ants. The identifier doesn't seem to be needed.

This was an enjoyable take on the prompt. Great work!

Take care, thanks for sharing, and keep writing *HeartT*


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