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 Where Are You Today? Open in new Window. [E]
Where are you today God of love?
by Lou-Here By His Grace Author Icon
Review by Monty Author IconMail Icon
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Rated: E | (5.0)
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Do you think that He may have given up?God has done so much but once he flooded the world with water to start thing over. Still man wants what he does not have anf things go back to the same. Today we have one that wishes to be the leader and will do anything to get there. What can God do? Your poem is fine with imagery rhythm and rhyme and paint a grand picture of the world today.
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