Hi Angelica,

This is a fantastic poem. The tone is tinged with surprise and annoyance. It grabs all the reader's attention and makes them want to read on. The poem is about someone who goes to play a video game only to find that the batteries in their console needs charging. I am hoping that the speaker will find either new batteries or is able to charge the ones they have. I read to the last word to find out. The free verse works well in this poem, and you have handled it very well. There is a wonderful rhythm here. The poem flows extremely well. It is a pleasure to read. You have not used punctuation in this poem, but this does not interfere with the flow of the poem. You have used grammar consistently here. There is nothing to distract the reader from their reading pleasure. Great job.