\"Writing.Com
*Magnify*
◄     December     ►
1969
SMTWTFS
 
1
2
3
4
5
6
7
8
9
10
11
12
13
14
15
16
17
18
19
20
21
22
23
24
25
26
27
28
29
30
31
Archive RSS
SPONSORED LINKS
BY ONLINE AUTHORS
Printed from https://writing.com/main/my_feedback/action/view/id/4783540
Review #4783540
Viewing a review of:
Image Protector
Promptly 4 and 5 Open in new Window. [13+]
Poems for years 4 and 5 of the Promptly Poetry Challenge.
by Beholden Author Icon
         Review for entry/chapter: "A Poem From Nowhere" Open in new Window.
Review of Promptly 4 and 5  Open in new Window.
In affiliation with The WDC Angel Army  Open in new Window.
Rated: 13+ | (5.0)
Access:  Public | Hide Review (?)
Greetings, Beholden!

Ah, this was clever. I didn't count the syllables, but I checked your rhymes as they wove skillfully throughout in the proscribed manner. You tell an all too relatable tale of inspiration slipping away with the rush and distractions of the day. I usually get my best writing done at night, when I should be sleeping. There's less fuss then, and the words fall together easier.

Nothing to fuss about here; I admire how handily you deal with all manner of challenges, whether stories or poems.

Take care, thanks for sharing, and keep writing *HeartT*


*Gold* My review has been submitted for consideration in "Good Deeds Get CASH!" Open in new Window..
   *CheckG* You responded to this review 11/01/2024 @ 8:11pm EDT
Printed from https://writing.com/main/my_feedback/action/view/id/4783540