Hi Veronika,

This is a fantastic poem. The tone is tinged with sadness. It grabs all the reader's attention and makes them want to read on. The poem is about your partner, how he is your inspiration and how it felt to have him leave. I am hoping that you have found more inspiration in your life. I read to the last word to find out. I loved this poem. The free verse works well in this poem, and you have handled it very well. There is a wonderful rhythm here. The poem flows extremely well. It is a pleasure to read. You have used punctuation and grammar consistently in this poem. There is nothing to distract the reader from their reading pleasure. Great job.