Hi Riverd0g,

This review comes with a huge thank you for reviewing my story. This is a fantastic story. The tone is formal. It suits the story and plot very well. The reader is wondering if Steve and his family will enjoy watching the celestial event on Saturn. They will read to the last word to find out. In the story, a university student runs into pirates when he goes with his family to celebrate his graduation on Saturn. The conflict is well defined. There is no doubt about what is going on here. The characters are well developed and believable. They come across as real people. There is no dialogue but it is not needed here. The description is detailed and vivid. It puts the reader all the way into the story. The story is well structured and consistent in terms of point of view and tense. You have accomplished a great deal in just a few words. Great job.