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 LORDLY POSTURES  Open in new Window. [E]
Some people, and nations, believe they are way above others.
by Dr M C Gupta Author Icon
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Rated: E | (5.0)
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Greetings,

I found you again on the Random Read and Review button.

This is a thought-provoking poem, leading us to question the narrator's exaggerated attitude of empowerment. We begin to see how much this attitude has infected real life leaders... more so now than when you originally wrote it.

The wisdom of your parody is indisputable. We all need more humility these days.

I noticed you have a bit of a punctuation error on the fifth line; perhaps a second look and a rewrite would be advisable.

Take care, thanks for sharing, and keep writing *HeartT*


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