Hi Spencer, This is a fantastic essay. The title is direct and to the point. The reader knows exactly what they will be getting out of the essay. I always used to drink herbal tea and began to read right away to find out more. You introduce the topic by telling the reader exactly what the essay is about. This takes all the reader's attention and focuses it completely on the topic and the essay. They will read to the last word. You have written about the benefits and cost effectiveness of drinking herbal teas as a part of your self-care routine. You have done your research here. You are conversant with your topic and easily make it comprehensible for your reader. The length is perfect. You completely develop your topic without belaboring the issue and making the essay tedious. You use a formal, organized style that is very appealing to the reader. Great job.
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