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Review #4782392
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These Are My JOTtings, Part #2 Open in new Window. [E]
We live much of life amid unique choices. Joy is anchored in The One beyond our life.
by Jay O'Toole Author Icon
         Review for entry/chapter: "Seguidilla: "Before the Day"" Open in new Window.
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Rated: E | (5.0)
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Thank you for sharing your poem with me.
The words are lovely and describe the story
of the theme well. The item has good imagery
and it is interesting. I like all of the item
and I have no favourite line.
The poem has no spelling errors,and needs no changes.
I noticed that there is no rhyming pattern, and it reads well.
A well written poem, and a joy to read. Keep writing.
Until the next time, signing out.
Reviewed by Mary Ann MCPhedran.














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