Hi Spiritual Dawning,

This is a fantastic poem. The tone is full of anticipation and love. It grabs all the reader's attention and makes them want to read on. The poem is about you love for God and how anxious you are to join Him. I want to meet and be close with God. I hope I enjoy my life and then enjoy my eternity with Him. I loved this poem and read to the last word. The rhyme is well done and consistent. It gives the poem a wonderful rhythm. The meter is consistent from line to line. The poem flows extremely well. It is a pleasure to read. You have used punctuation and grammar consistently in this poem. There is nothing to distract the reader from their reading pleasure. Great job.