Hi Elora,

This is a fantastic prologue. The prologue opens shock as a body drops suddenly to the ground. The reader is wondering who has been killed and will read on to the find out. This is a wonderful opening hook. The detail puts the reader all the way into the prologue. You have captured all the reader's attention with extreme danger and the main character trying to get away. The dialogue is well done and realistic. The main character's captor speaks like a real person. The prologue is well paced. It is fast paced, and this keeps the reader rapidly following along to see what will happen to the main character next. The characters are well developed and believable. They come across as real people. Great job.