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Review #4782032
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 Along The Broken Road Open in new Window. [ASR]
focusing on loss and pain and understanding why accidents happen.
by JSeanAuthor Author Icon
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Rated: ASR | (4.5)
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Greetings and welcome to writing.com!

Well, this is a depressing thing to find on the Random Read and Review button *Laugh*

Seriously, you've chosen free verse poetry to deal with a serious and even morbid subject that many people around here prefer to avoid.

Your formatting is excellent, shifting the size font to suit the transition of narrative.

If you are dealing with the real pain and loss of life from a car accident, I extend my deepest condolences. Otherwise, it creates a deep metaphor for that sudden shift from from life into death that we all must face at some point. When I saw your title I remembered the old Rascal Flatts song... You may want to consider a different title, or perhaps your theme is deepened even further by the thought of being cut short as one travels life's broken road which should have led to something.

As is usual when I review poetry, I have nothing to suggest here for improvement. You've created a haunting and memorable poem suitable for the season.

Take care, thanks for sharing and keep writing *Smile* *HeartT*


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