Just a cute piece to read. You talk about a moment where, presumably as a kid, the person fell asleep outside during the night, only to wake up when the sun comes up, and get called un for breakfast. There is nothing quite like camping in one's own backyard, and enjoying a moment or two with nature.

Characters
The characters seem interesting.

Spelling and Grammar
You have a number of instances where "i" should be capitalize, and at least one "mothers" that should be "mother's".

Well, this is the BIG BAD WOLF, and I howl at the moon every night.
HOWLLLLLLLLLLLLL!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!



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