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 Irrelevant? Open in new Window. [ASR]
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Rated: ASR | (5.0)
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Greetings, Sonali!

I found this on the Random Read and Review button. What a fun story! You've created characters we want to root for and enjoy watching succeed in their endeavors. What could be more relatable than a grandma afraid to sing in front of an audience?

Anshul is a spunky dear who knows what's good for Granny. I love how you're comfortable with your own culture and use it unabashedly in your writing. The names, the big families, etc. People say WdC is a Western, US-centric place, but I find enough diversity to keep things fascinating and fun.

A delightful tale. I don't see anything much to correct. Perhaps the name Anshul could be introduced sooner rather than later.

Take care, thanks for sharing, and keep writing *HeartT*


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