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Sweet Sorrow Open in new Window. [E]
“Goodbye.” A very simple word ...
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Rated: E | (4.5)
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Greetings Ken!

A lovely poem we have here, full of feelings and memories which linger in the narrator's mind. I appreciate the attitude of moving on but still holding the love which once was. It matters little who was in the wrong or why they parted, only that there was something and it's gone.

It reminds me of... Well, surely you don't care to know about the lead singer of *Think* *DragonHead* *DragonHeadB*. The maturation of thought and perspective here is universal, and this would make a good song.

I love the flow of your meter and verse, but one thing bugs me enormously: "I'd of." Surely you know it's "I'd have!" It wouldn't change anything to correct that pesky error, which causes me to subtract a half star from your otherwise flawless rating.

Take care, thanks for sharing, and keep writing *HeartT*


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