Hi Serena,

This is a fantastic poem. The tone is aggressive. It grabs all the reader's attention and makes them want to read on. In the poem, you point out that we have to be leery of people that would do us harm and lead us away from God. I am good at reading people's intentions. I have only been really fooled twice. I loved this poem and read to the last word. The free verse works well in this poem, and you have handled it very well. There is a wonderful rhythm here. The poem flows extremely well. It is a pleasure to read. You have used punctuation and grammar consistently in this poem. There is nothing to distract the reader from their reading pleasure. Great job.