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 A Sight for Sore Eyes Open in new Window. [E]
A poem for sports fans!
by Tim Chiu Author Icon
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Rated: E | (5.0)
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Greetings, Tim!

As always, I found this through the Random Read and Review button. I love finding your tidy and thoughtful poetry.

This sporting theme which then relates to the grander contest of life and spirituality runs deep in biblical literature. St Paul used the ancient Greek sports culture to illustrate how important it is to strive for that which we desire, and to pour ourselves humbly into good works so we may be richly rewarded and honored.

Your meter is excellent, alternating rhymes in a way which is neither trite nor annoying. I have nothing to suggest. Great work *Smile*

Take care, thanks for sharing, and keep writing *HeartT*


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