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 Arkansas Open in new Window. [E]
A cheap hotel visit
by Lou-Here By His Grace Author Icon
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Rated: E | (4.5)
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Greetings, Lou!

An amusing slice of life we have here, bringing us a vignette of a trip through Arkansas back to Texas. We see your disdain for what little you've seen of the state.

I have to disagree with your evaluation, as my mom likes to tell me of what a beautiful state it was when she was there thirty years ago. Little Rock was a fine, safe city, where she and my father could walk around in the wee hours delivering papers in perfect safety.

The free verse is conversational and chatty, leading us casually through your memory and nudging us quickly to the interstate before we have a chance to question your viewpoint or ask for proof. I sense a bit of humor, however *Smile*

I have nothing to suggest for improvement, unless asking for a better indication of why you didn't like Little Rock *Laugh*

Take care, thanks for sharing, and keep writing *HeartT*


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