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 Mein geliebter GOTT Open in new Window. [E]
That is a poem about my beloved God he is the one that made me in his image
by chuckles Author Icon
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Rated: E | (5.0)
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Hi chuckles,

This is a fantastic poem. The tone is full of joy. It grabs all the reader's attention and makes them want to read on. The poem is about the blessings God has given this world and us. I believe in God and enjoy, everyday, everything He as given to this world and my life. I loved this poem and read to the last word. the free verse works well in this poem, and you have handled it very well. There is a wonderful rhythm here. The poem flows extremely well. It is a pleasure to read. You have not used punctuation in this poem, but this does not interfere with the flow. You have used grammar consistently here. There is nothing to distract the reader from their reading pleasure. Great job.

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