Hi Constance,

This is a fantastic poem. The tone is formal but tinged with sorrow. It grabs all the reader's attention and makes them want to read on. The poem is about the truths about you and exist in your life that you are dealing with. I am delighted with the look I get at you as a person as well as a writer as I read. I loved this poem and read to the last word. The free verse works well in this poem, and you have handled it very well. There is a wonderful rhythm here. The poem flows extremely well. It is a pleasure to read. You have used punctuation and grammar consistently in this poem. There is nothing to distract the reader from their reading pleasure. Great job.