Hi SeanFhear , I found your writing in the Read and Review Section. Hopefully, this review will find you in good spirits.


On Title/Subject
Good title, but it's not totally covering the content. A very lyrical, great love poem.


General impressions
Wow, this is a very loving poem, with a great atmosphere, good wording, pace, and rhythm.

Favorite Parts
Every touch is a tale,
a story in every string of hair,
O I can't have my enough.

Especially "Every Touch Is A Tale". I'm impressed by that line. Do you mind if I borrow and use your words in a prose poem someday? I absolutely adored this line!

Suggestions
No real suggestions, other than you perhaps take another look at the title and come up with something even better. Just a thought.


Final thoughts

A romantic poem that had to be written. Thanks for sharing!

Keep up the good work, enjoy writing!

WakeUpAndLive



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