Hi A.A.,

This is a fantastic story. The tone is full of frustration and confusion. It grabs all the reader's attention and makes them want to read on. The reader is wondering why the speaker is taking this repetitive drive over and over. They will read to the last word to find out. In the story, someone ends up taking a monotonous journey over and over again and they want to stop. The conflict is well defined. There is no doubt about what is going on here. The characterization is fully developed and believable. The story concentrates on the speaker, and they come across as a real person. There is no dialogue but it is not needed here. The description is detailed and vivid. It puts the reader all the way into the story. The story is well structured and consistent in terms of point of view and tense. You have accomplished a great deal in just a few words. Great job.