Hi The Nazca Lines ,I found your writing at random. Hopefully, this review will find you in good spirits.


On Title/Subject
Simple and eloquent title. The job of a poet is to ponder in the night and create. It's 5.47 here in The Netherlands and we are separated by one hour, so you are a night owl as well. Greetz.

General impressions
I love this little poem. It has great rhyme and rhythm and there is an excellent flow and atmosphere.

Favorite Parts
The sunlight fades into the distance
Soon the stars will greet,
the moon arises in an instant
The world is at my feet.

This first stanza is wonderful. Full of awe and wonder and really optimistic about Life and your place in it: "The world is at my feet".

Kinda like I am feeling now, so I can relate!

Suggestions
There is one thing, a typo or deliberate? 'Gods', did you mean it to be plural, or is it God's?

Final thoughts
A verse that covers every night and every day. Neat. Thank you for sharing and Good Morning!

Keep up the good work, enjoy writing!

WakeUpAndLive~"HoHoHo"



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