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Review #4779125
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Promptly 4 and 5 Open in new Window. [13+]
Poems for years 4 and 5 of the Promptly Poetry Challenge.
by Beholden Author Icon
         Review for entry/chapter: "Water" Open in new Window.
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Rated: 13+ | (5.0)
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Greetings, Beholden!

I’m here as a fellow member of the PPC5 challenge, to review your work.

Has anyone else aside from me found it hard to settle on just one Kimo? I wrote not one but four. Once I got the hang of the syllables - honestly, syllable counting is getting easier for me each time I sit down and try. I used to say rather “proudly” in my reviews that I detest counting syllables and fussing over form, but practice makes better… now I’m considering trying my hand at a sonnet for "Poetic Traditions Poetry Contest " Open in new Window.. Why not?

Anyway, this hits the nail on the head, capturing a universal moment of sheer physics in a crisply photographic way and sticking to the requirements. I’ve watched many a water drop make the precipitous journey from the tip of the tap down into the sink. As a child I was fascinated by such simple things and learned a lot from them. On YouTube we can even watch cats playing with and staring at water drops.

Have fun with your project! I’m looking forward to reading and reviewing more of your work over the coming months.

Take care, thanks for sharing, and keep writing *HeartT*


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