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 My reality Open in new Window. [GC]
Take a peek into the mind of a fellow over-thinker and day-dreamer.
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Rated: GC | (4.5)
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A poem about imagination - did one myself some years back. Imagination is a powerful thing, as it can let you escape life's hardships, so that you can have a moment of mental enjoyment. You can think all the crazy things you want - werewolves, unicorns, dragons, sasquatch, elves, mermaids, and more. They let you find a moment, or two, of peace, especially in a world dominated by chaos.

Thoughts
An interesting piece to read.

Spelling and Grammar
I don't see any issues with spelling or grammar.

Suggestions
If you want to keep this at 13+, you'll want to change the "F-word" into something else. Otherwise, the rating will get increased to GC, because of the repeated uses of that word. Trust me on that.

Well, this is the BIG BAD WOLF, and I howl at the moon every night.
HOWLLLLLLLLLLLLL!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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