Selling the House [E] Flash Fiction |
Greetings, Jacky! I am reviewing this because I discovered it on Read & Review. And for the second time today! First of all, my reviews are intended to be helpful and encouraging, not hurtful in any way. Use what you feel works for you, and leave the rest. The Positives/What I Liked Ha! I could relate to this, only not the moving part. Hubby seems to think we need to get rid of anything and everything we're not using...to make it easier on the kids after we die. Geesh! He's really looking ahead! Actually, he has mentioned before that someday we might not want to live on five acres because it would be too hard to keep up when were old and we might want to move. Okay, I'll give him that. And now it's obvious I've veered off a bit! It's interesting what is important to one person and not as important to the other, right? I liked your little story because I could relate! We did have our place for sale once, maybe thirty-five years or so ago. Wow, did it ever look nice, but it's like staging something. It didn't look lived in. We didn't end up going through with it and I'm glad. Suggestions/Comments to Consider I didn't notice anything. Final Thoughts Nice work. Everything flowed along nicely and also made me smile. A Review from: "Positive Hearts Reviews Group" Have a great day and... K e e p on W r i t i n g ! Cubby ")
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