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Given: Sep 30, 2024 at 10:08am
Length: 1,399 Characters |
1,041 w/o WritingML
Greetings, Jacky! I am reviewing this because I am discovered it on Read & Review.
First of all, my reviews are intended to be helpful and encouraging, not hurtful in any way. Use what you feel works for you, and leave the rest.
The Positives/What I Liked
I really enjoyed this. At first, I was just reading along, wondering where the story would go, and then I came to the Aha! moment, when it all came together! It's interesting how words can be misinterpreted, and especially by school kids trying to understand a word in a book they are reading, with such words as 'ajar' (misinterpreted as a jar) and 'figure' (misinterpreted as a numeral.) Nice work!
Suggestions/Comments to Consider
Nothing really stood out, though there were just a few questionable punctuation placements I wondered about.
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