Hello, Seabreeze, aka sandywrite!

INITIAL IMPRESSION / OVERVIEW:

I loved your Veteran's Day poem and thought it was neat that you initially wrote it on an actual Veteran's day.

Your writing kept me riveted and I read straight through to the end.



MORE DETAILED FEEDBACK:

Happy Writing.Com Anniversary day and month! I believe I read this lovely poem of yours sometime in the past and enjoyed it, but didn't have time to review it right then, so I flagged it for an anniversary review (meaning I saved the link to it in a special "September" file. ). I hope you enjoy this review as a celebration of your time here and find the review uplifting and encouraging.

As a veteran myself, I especially appreciated your poem and prayers. I really loved that you included concrete triggers to pray for veterans in your poem, and I imagine, in your actual life. I love your love of our country, it's veterans, and most importantly, our Lord God.

Your whole poem was a great blessing to read. I appreciate that you reflected on some of the sacrifices and commitments veterans make in service to our country and that you included both genders (so many think it's just men... even in 2024!).

My favorite line was: "God bless the *Angel* Veterans and their families." Some people might claim it's a cliche, but it means a lot when said in earnest, and even more when accompanied by an actual prayer to the Lord God. I also thought it was the perfect conclusion to the poem.

I didn't notice any spelling or grammatical mistakes (or mistakes of any kind) in your veterans' tribute poem.

I thought the emotional, and military genres you selected were appropriate
for this veterans' tribute poem of yours.


IDEAS TO MAKE YOUR PIECE STRONGER:
I would love to have something great to share here, but I think it's wonderful as it is. Well done!


As with any review, please take what serves you and release or ignore what doesn't.

CONCLUSION:
I enjoyed reading your veterans' tribute poem, and thank you for your beautiful poem and prayers.

Thank you for sharing your time, creativity, heart, experiences, and writing with the Writing.Com community!

Once again, happy anniversary month! I hope the year ahead is filled with blessings and joy for you!

May love, joy and peace be yours in abundance!
PWheeler












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