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Given: Sep 29, 2024 at 9:50am
Length: 749 Characters |
726 w/o WritingML
Ah, recess - the time that all kids at school look forward to, second only to leaving for the day. I enjoyed recess - I wish that High School had it. Honestly, I think that there needs to be adult-sized playgrounds, just so adults can just unleash their inner kid. It's a way to unwind, burn off some energy without being forced to do so. More of that is needed.
Thoughts
An interesting piece to read - takes me back to my childhood.
Spelling and Grammar
Is the Carro mentioned a male or a female, as you use both "he" and "she" in the same sentence (although if they use both, I'm not going to judge)?
Well, this is the BIG BAD WOLF, and I howl at the moon every night.
HOWLLLLLLLLLLLLL!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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