Hi Weirdone-Back in the games ;

It's 💙 Carly - February is here! and I have the pleasure of reading and reviewing your poem as I pushed the Read and Review button on the side of the site and your item popped up.

Thank you for giving the explanation for a Huitian with its eight lines and eight syllables per line. That makes it easier to give a review - as I am not an expert of poetry - though I do love it so.

You managed to get the eight lines to convey your thanks for being free. The rhyming pattern also works, but I found I had to say money a little differently to get it to rhyme with free. But it works.

Thank you for sharing your work. I look forward to reading more.



My review has been submitted for consideration in "Good Deeds Get CASH!" .