Well, this is a strange, if interesting piece to read. It seems to depict someone on a trip through either Hell or the River Styx, or something very similar, not to mention very dark. Sometimes it's hard to make heads or tails of what's going on - I will admit to that one. In any case, I don't want to end up there.

Thoughts
An interesting piece to read, though I wonder about the paragraph alignment.

Spelling and Grammar
Taking in account speaking patterns, I don't see any issues with spelling or grammar.

Well, this is the BIG BAD WOLF, and I howl at the moon every night.
HOWLLLLLLLLLLLLL!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!


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