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 Pie charts Open in new Window. [E]
Writing ielts pie charts
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Rated: E | (4.5)
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Greetings and welcome to writing.com!

I see you’re off to a good start, with one item in your port. This looks like a school project, describing a pie chart which we don’t actually have access to on this site. If you want, you can use the chart in question as the cover for this item. Or if this is simply a requirement of posting publicly, assigned by your teacher, then you hardly need our advice.

You’ve described the chart well, pulling the stats from the image and sharing them with us along with simple interpretations. I have two suggestions: you should perhaps correct or take a second look at the subtitle, as it appears to have a typo in it. Second, you should perhaps change your selected genre from “Writing.com” to “Educational.”

Aside from that, it looks great! Best of luck around here. If you’re planning to stay and add more content, I would recommend writing a little something about yourself in your bio block.

Take care, thanks for sharing and keep writing *Smile* *HeartT*


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