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 A Love’s Heart - The Pleasing Open in new Window. [E]
A moment in time with a partner of meaning - a love poem.
by Tim Chiu Author Icon
Review by Monty Author IconMail Icon
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Rated: E | (5.0)
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I believe she is an angel and I was seeing her through your eyes as I read these twelve lines. Always a favorite scheme with the ABAB form and you nailed this one with perfect rhythm, rhyme and imagery. Well polished with that final stanza. You surely got inspiration from a partner that you love very much. Well titled and described.
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