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 The Jungle Setting Open in new Window. [E]
Describe a setting in words.
by Winchester Jones Author Icon
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Rated: E | (5.0)
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I enjoyed reading this vivid description of an adventure through the jungle. I appreciated the brevity of it. This would be considered a vignette, I believe, although there is some rise and fall of action as the man follows the trail. You made the experience come alive with specific details which engaged the senses, such as the scents of the environment and the sight of the beer cans stuck in the dried out riverbed. There’s enough here for a longer story; it feels like a sample of something quite exciting.

Perhaps a word count in the subtitle would be good so we know what we’re getting into. And again, I’ll remind you gently to add two relevant genres to the item, though your window for Quills is past with this one. You could use “Nature,” “Drama” or “Thriller/Suspense.” Other than that, I can’t think of any suggestions for improvement.

Take care, thanks for sharing, and keep writing *HeartT*


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