Hi Jo Paynter ;

Welcome to Writing.com. I have the pleasure of reading and reviewing your poem as I clicked on the button on the side panel (its a great way to earn extra gift points ) Your poem popped up with a 45 minute time period to read and review - that's how that button works.

I really liked this piece. I can feel the yearnings of the boy and his mother waiting and watching for the lobster fishing boat to come home... to make it through the foggy mist.

I love the last stanza:

The boat take shape
The motor rumbles
As it slips into the sheltered harbor.
Daddy's home again.


You craft a poem full of sensory details that bring the image of your telling into my mind. Well done.

I notice you joined only a bit ago, but you have several pieces already in your portfolio. Well done. Don't hesitate if you have any questions.

My review has been submitted for consideration in "Good Deeds Get CASH!" .